On the way to college
In the bus
Bought a five rupee ticket,
Not seven
"Wow! Saved two rupees!
My friends did it too!"
Danced my way to college
Knew there was a test
"Ah! No worry! I have chits!
My friends did it too!"
Aced the test
Felt jubilant
Sweet talked someone
Into a favour
"Great! It worked!
My friends did it too!"
Flipped my way back home
"Saved another two rupees!
Brilliant collections for a first timer!
I am so excited!
My friends did it too!"
Walked in with my souvenirs
Two five rupee tickets,
A chit with scribbled answers,
And
The notes of the class topper.
Feeling thrilled
A sense of achievement, almost.
Stuck the tickets
On the mirror
"The first day's loot!"
I said, smiled.
"My friends did it too!"
I looked at the person
I cared about the most
She looked at me
And sneered.
I had done it too.
Bought a five rupee ticket,
Not seven
"Wow! Saved two rupees!
My friends did it too!"
Danced my way to college
Knew there was a test
"Ah! No worry! I have chits!
My friends did it too!"
Aced the test
Felt jubilant
Sweet talked someone
Into a favour
"Great! It worked!
My friends did it too!"
Flipped my way back home
"Saved another two rupees!
Brilliant collections for a first timer!
I am so excited!
My friends did it too!"
Walked in with my souvenirs
Two five rupee tickets,
A chit with scribbled answers,
And
The notes of the class topper.
Feeling thrilled
A sense of achievement, almost.
Stuck the tickets
On the mirror
"The first day's loot!"
I said, smiled.
"My friends did it too!"
I looked at the person
I cared about the most
She looked at me
And sneered.
I had done it too.
An impromptu piece, written this morning, completely unedited. I can't think of a proper title for it...help needed! And no, it's not on me, it's not on anyone. Just a random thought. Please don't stone me for this! : )
40 comments:
loved it.. you sweet talking thief
Hehe Chriz! Thanks. :)
Sweet!!
It made me smile. :-)
ohhhh
its shoo shweet:)
cheers!
Whatever it is!!! It is very cute just like you..
But I would love some elaboration on it from you
:-)
its beautiful!luvd it..
Thanks CG! Glad. :)
Thanks Gaurangi! Sweet. :)
You want a name
How about 'Partners in crime'... then it seems bit too unrealistic.
How about 'I am Not Alone'
anyway a cute poem.
Thanks Bhawana! Only you have the patience to deal with my nonsense! ;)
Well, it was meant to be the story of one day in the life of a girl, about what all she did during the day, and how in the end, she looks at her own reflection, and something pinches her, and she feels pangs of guilt. That was what it was "meant to be"!! ;)
Thanks Anwesa! :)
Thanks Suresh! :)
wo wo tara ji..that was such a BEAUTIFUL POEM...felt a tinch of mischiviousness in the feeling it creates around the reader...TARA-TYPES..
totally rocking!
cheerz!
n yes!! we are friends...nah! BUDDIES..RITE..?
well i agree to suresh here...'partners in crime' totally fits the sense..
love:buddy!
nulla post! :)
amazing!! i simply loved it!! super duper poem!
i appreciated ur poem
my friends did it too!!!
:) I did it Too!!! I mean for the Title.. lol
Nice nice nice.. :)
'and I flunked...My friends did it too'.... hehe
hey, this was nice yar... Enjoyed it thoroughly...
n y r u still thinking abt exams??...very bad habit... :D
pavam pavam....:P
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Thanks Niccku! Oopsie...thanks buddy! ;)
Thanks Raka! Someone's learning Tamil here, I can see! ;) Nallathu! (Means good.)
Thank you so much Ushaji! Yes, better title. :)
Haha Arjun! ;) Thanks! :) Exam bootham erangarthe ille, enna pannardhu? Romba pavam...siva siva! Hehe!
exam bootham yengallakellam erave eradu... erengara prachanaye varadhu....
unga maadri buddisaali pasanga da eppome exam patti yochitirpinge..!!
P.S- My longest tamil dialogue till date... Hope u understood...
*ahem*
:) Shhweeet...
Peace.
hey tat was sweet and naughty
:)
THIEF!!!!! MISCHIEVOUS!!!! Loved reading...
Hey,this is really full of energy. Good one.
hey nice one, had a reflection of MISCHIEVOUS you :)..
was smiling when i finished reading...
well was out of touch exams going on :(
keep writing
cheers
that was really cute one!
wow! that was just awesome...
Again... sweet school memories...
And all I can say is that I did these things too... but I never sticked it on to a mirror.
Superb one...
:)
sweet poem!!!!!feelin nostalgic!!!
Hehe Arjun! Yaaru varsham muzhakku aatom potundhaalo, avaalke dhaane exam bootham erum, padichavallukku enna!! :P Hope, I got all that right, my Tamil's certainly not the best... :)
Thanks Kartz! :)
Thanks yaar PJ! :)
Thanks Rajesh! :)
Thanks Old Monk! :)
Hey Chintan! Good to see you back and thanks. :)
Thanks Aparna! :)
Thanks Aneesh! Glad. :)
Thanks Siddhu! Good to see you back! :)
Nice cute Poem you "thirudi".....!!! :P
Romba padicha ipdi taan.. arai koraya padichalum ipdi taan.. ithuku taan naanga padikkave illa.. sure ah flunk taan nu terinjapram... y all this... ;)
Cheers..!!
S
P.S: Made me smile... brought all my coll memories back.!!! Thanks...
Hehe S! I can't believe I understood everything! :P Nejamma thaan...why all this? Nekku naraiya lessons kadechuduthu! Nanri! ;)
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